Thursday, October 16, 2008

Thesis

Because of his inability to self analyze, and his eagerness to be lifted out of the shadow of his older brother, Happy Loman is a version of his father, grasping parental success but never realizing the fault in his world view.

4 comments:

Lauren Z said...

What do you mean by "grasping parental succes"? It sounds a little unclear to me.

Reagan said...

I think where your thesis is going will lead to a strong paper but maybe reconsider some word choice. Can you say "lifted out of the shadow" any differently?

Lauren Z said...

Yes, by the way, I thought it was very well written, just that part confused me.

corilin said...

With his inability to self analyze and eagerness to please, Happy Loman's world view parallels his fathers in that they cannot realize their fault.


smeh.