Thursday, March 19, 2009

For a few moments [he] watched the sky, (227)
The big white moon added resonance, (210)
[But] there was no wind, (210)
You could blame the field, the mud, the climate (177)

[There were] tree frogs, maybe, or snakes or flying squirrels or who-knew-what, (221)
[but no] big crow looking at you from a boulder along the river, (56)
There was no wind, (210)
The night was absolute (210)

The country rose up in thick walls of wilderness,
Triple-canopied jungle, mountains unfolding into higher mountains,
ravines and gorges and fast-moving rivers and waterfalls, (91-92)
[But] there was no wind (210)

…Isolated and vulnerable, (92)
Knocked (…) against the pagoda wall, (189)
Surrounded on all sides by flat paddy land, (…)
And rolls of razor-tipped barbed wire, (192)

“Eight months in fantasyland,(…),” (204)
(…) unattached from the natural world, (208)
Swarms of bugs, billions of them, (221)
[But] there was no wind (210)
to carry them home

Just holes to be dug

1 comment:

Dan Szmurlo said...

The wind in the poem is the soldier's freedom and escape from the war. It is also hope. They are trapped at all times, and there are no limitless, freeflying "birds" (soldiers). This poem was inspired by Mr. Hester's description of his desire to go home and his entrappment in the war.